The Big Bad Wolf
written by Angie
One day in the forest, I was looking for food! When I looked to the right, I saw a girl; her name is the Red Riding Hood with a basket in her hand. I asked her: “where you are going and what is in the basket?” She said: “I’m going to my grandmother to give her breads and butter.”
One day in the forest, I was looking for food! When I looked to the right, I saw a girl; her name is the Red Riding Hood with a basket in her hand. I asked her: “where you are going and what is in the basket?” She said: “I’m going to my grandmother to give her breads and butter.”
I said to myself if I get to her grandmother’s house before she did I could eat her grandmother’s and her for breakfast. I said to the girl: “Do you notice how nice it is!” She said “Yes, it is.” Then, she stopped and looked around. She picked flowers. While she walked far, I had time to run and went to her grandmother’s house. I knocked and I pretended like Red Riding Hood. I said: “It’s me grandma, your favorite Red Riding Hood.” Grandmother answered: “Come in dear, the door is open!” I got in and went upstairs. I saw her grandmother was lying in the bed. I jumped up and ate her. Then, I put on grandmother’s clothes. I got in bed. I worn grandmother’s glass and coved myself. Then, I waited for the Red Riding Hood.
I heard a knock. I said: “Who is this?” The Red Riding Hood answered: “It’s me grandma, your favorite Red Riding Hood!” I pretended like her grandmother and said: “Come in dear, the door is open!” I heard she came in and walked upstairs. She asked: “Grandma, why do you have a long face and big ears? I said: “So I can hear you better!” then, she asked me again: “Grandma, why do you have a big mouth” I said: “So I can eat you!” I jumped over and ate her. I was very tired after ate both of them. I fell asleep.
I heard a knock. I said: “Who is this?” The Red Riding Hood answered: “It’s me grandma, your favorite Red Riding Hood!” I pretended like her grandmother and said: “Come in dear, the door is open!” I heard she came in and walked upstairs. She asked: “Grandma, why do you have a long face and big ears? I said: “So I can hear you better!” then, she asked me again: “Grandma, why do you have a big mouth” I said: “So I can eat you!” I jumped over and ate her. I was very tired after ate both of them. I fell asleep.
A hunter came by to check on grandmother when he saw the door opened. He went upstairs and saw me happily sleeping. He did not see grandmother. He got a gun out. He thought, maybe the grandmother was in my stomach. He got his knife out and cut my stomach. He saw grandmother and the Red Riding Hood came rolling out of my stomach. He rescued them and put rocks inside my stomach. When I woke up, I felt heavy. I got off the bed and I fell to the ground. I could not get up…….
