Waiting for My New Cousin
by Ryan Risse
I’m waiting for my new baby cousin to arrive!
It should be any day now
my Aunt feels like she’s bigger than a cow!
I can’t wait to see her little face
and let her know she has a place
in this family of mine.
Her name is going to be Riley,
she’ll be cute, funny and smiley!
I will hold her in my arms
and tell her that I love her
because she’s a cousin like no other!!
by Ryan Risse
I’m waiting for my new baby cousin to arrive!
It should be any day now
my Aunt feels like she’s bigger than a cow!
I can’t wait to see her little face
and let her know she has a place
in this family of mine.
Her name is going to be Riley,
she’ll be cute, funny and smiley!
I will hold her in my arms
and tell her that I love her
because she’s a cousin like no other!!
19 comments:
Ryan~
I LOVE your new poem. What a heartfelt and genuine piece of writing. Make sure you save it for Riley so that she can look back when she is older and know how excited her cousin was. I'm so proud of you!
Love,
Mrs. Woytek
Ryan your ending is an incredible.
You put alot of thought into your poem!!!!!!!!!!
IT MUST BE EXCITING HAVING A NEW BABY C.
I like how you expressed whats happening in real life.
I bet your cousin is going to be cute. Your poem sounds great it has so much detail.
Ryan i think that it is so cool that you made a poem about your new cousin!! Your poem was great
because you 're probably exited
Ryan-
You put alot of thought and deatail into your poem I love it! I know what it feels like to be waiting for a new baby... cause I have a baby half-brother.He's one he'll be two June fourteenth!
love your peom p.s congats on your new cosin
ryan your poem is FANTASTIC!!!you put alot of detail to it.IT'S BEAST!
Ryan your tittle is really good.
You must be really excited.
I can't wait till see her too.
I thought you rilly described your poem.
I liked how you told about your new baby cousin by telling her name and how she is smiley.
Ryan I thought your poem was so cute tell Riley I said hi!
Ryan I thought your poem was so cute tell Riley I said hi!
Ryan I likeed how you put what her name was and you describbed how your Aunt felt like a COW!!!!
Hi Ryan I'm a year younger than you but I'm Patrick N I love your writing
That was AWESOME.
Rayn, your poem is great!
That was AWESOME!
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