Us
Me and him
Him and me
Always together
As you can see
He likes soda
I like ice tea
It's a pain
We can't agree
Sometimes we fight
It can't always be he
That's a shame
I found the key
We're two friends with two faces
Him and me
Worse than two
We could be three
11 comments:
This is great! It sounds like a Dr. Seuss book! Great job!
that is really good
I found it intresting.
Andrew THE STORY IS AMAZING YOUR THE BOMB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT ROCKED I LOVE THAT POEM!!!!!!
your story had so much fun in it
Your poem sounds great. It has alot of detail.
Andrew that poem you just wrote is very cool.
It makes a perfect scence to almost any age group.
You should continue writing poems on this blog.
THAT ROCKED CAUSE YOU TOOK SOME WORDS FROM OTHER POEMS AND YOU MADE A REMIX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ANDREW ITS COOL HOW YOU TOOK WORDS FROM A POEM AND LIKE TRICKED IT OUT! THAT WAS PURE BEASTIVITY!!!
That is the Best poem I ever herd.
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