written by Olivia Thompson and Caroline Smith
I want my family to be free
Because I don’t have any money
I work hard and I don’t get any credit
I have a family
I have two children
One is named Olivia and the other Caroline
I barely know my children
I get pictures from my wife
But I still miss my family
I barely see them in sight
But one day I saw my friend
And he said you are free to go
I was so happy
Now I could see my family
And I am free
I still can’t build a house
Because I still don’t have any money
But I don’t need money
I just need some love
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9 comments:
you did really really GOOD!!!!!!!!
Caroline and Olivia are so cool!!!
They are the bomb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your right all you need is love!
Your poem is awesome...love buys happiness!!!!!!!!!
Olivia and Caroline,
I love the ending,The title says it all. You can be free if you have love. Great job!
That was the best peom i've heard and keep writing peoms good job
It could be a song,but if it is not a song it will still be a great poem.You should sing that song in front of the whole school because it is just make me feel...sad glad and happy also it is true that you only need love.
THAT TOTALLY ROCKED BECAUSE YOU DESCRIBEDED
Caroline and Olivia are so great!!
You should keep on doing poems and putting them on this blog because it would be so great. I like how you called it ''I Want To Be Free''. because I want to be free to.
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