Written by Kathleen Murphy
The sand feels good on my feet the water is a masterpiece.
The wind blows slowly through my hair.
The sun shines sweetly on my back.
There is joy in my face.
I hear the water make a sweet melody.
I love this place.
I love the beach.
The calming most beautiful place.
12 comments:
Kathleen~ Your words are lovely! What a calming, peaceful poem. I can actually close my eyes and feel as though I am there. Love it!!!
I wish I was there right now to get a tan!
i like the idea of the beach good job!
Kathleen, Your poem sounded so pretty. It is really relaxing!
i didn't know you could use that much detail
I love the beach.
Kathleen Your poem made me feel like I was there.
Kathleen Your poem made me feel like I was there.
I love the waves crasing too!! YOU ROCK!!
Kathleen awesome poem.Why cause you put so much detail.I almost fainted.
Kathleen ROCKS!
Why cause evrything about your beach poem was what actualy happens at the beach.
Your poem reminds me of not only of the beach but your poem also reminds me of my cousins because your poem reminds me of the shore and thats when I see all of my cousins.(at the beach)
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