Written by Meaghan Janis
The beach is so fun!!
You can play in the ocean
or in the sand.
But be careful because the
sand can get HOT!!!
It is sunny outside and the perfect
weather to play in.
When summer comes I know it will be time
for the beach.
But when summer is over I will have to
wait til next year.
You can play in the ocean
or in the sand.
But be careful because the
sand can get HOT!!!
It is sunny outside and the perfect
weather to play in.
When summer comes I know it will be time
for the beach.
But when summer is over I will have to
wait til next year.
7 comments:
Meaghan, I love how you wrote "HOT" in all capital letters. That is a great strategy writers use to show emphasis. Your poem makes me feel excited for my first beach day of the summer!
Hey Meaghan ... I reallllllllly liked your beach poem. I wish it was summer right now. I can't wait. YOU ARE THE BOMB!!!!!!!
THE SAND FEELS GOOD WHEN IT IS HOT! NICE JOB MEAGHEN!
your story was so good keep on writing storys
MEAGHAN U R THE BOMB UR POEM ROCKS OUT LOUD!!!!
I loved that you put the "sand gets very hot"because it does get very hot.Do you love the beach?I love the beach.Remember that your the bbbbbbbbbooooooooommmmmmmmmbbbbbbbbb!!!!!!!!!That always hits me.
great poem!! i love the beach!!
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