by Ryan Risse
Baseball is fun
It is cool
I like to play
when I come home from school.
When you hear the ball on the bat go crack,
you know you got a good whack!
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12 comments:
Great Ryan!!! I can tell you LOVE baseball and it is great that I can tell that from the poem you wrote.
It was very good because i like how you made ryhms
I liked how you talked about something you like.
I liked how you talked about something you like.
AWESOME!
YOU DID AWESOME!
Geat job Ryan that was a grea t peom
your poem ryms very good and it is just awsome!!!!!!!!!!Your #1,also your the bomb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BASEBALL!
I love baseball! It is so much fun to me and alot of other people do to.
Ryan your poem makes me want to go outside and play game of baseball.Thats how much yor poem made me think of baseball!!!!!!!!!!!
Your poem has great of detail! It's awesome.
SPORTS!
DETAIL!
YAH!
RYAN!
Amazing poem! It looks like you really like baseball!
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